tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1349996487661699948.post4443830852916265932..comments2023-10-18T20:57:28.103+13:00Comments on Daniel : Summer Learning JourneyPBS Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11241848545582443830noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1349996487661699948.post-40095469847499125662017-01-04T19:03:30.754+13:002017-01-04T19:03:30.754+13:00Hi Daniel,
What a great short story to round out ...Hi Daniel,<br /><br />What a great short story to round out your first week of your Learning Journey. Well done!<br /><br />I really enjoyed reading it, in particular I thought the language you used to describe what was happening was excellent. Your story had me wondering what kind of experiment they might have been doing to have that kind of reaction! With all those different colours, they could have been playing with all sorts of chemicals. Do you have a science building at Panmure Bridge? I hope no accidents like this one ever happen there!<br /><br />Awesome creative writing Daniel, I'm really looking forward to reading the second week of your learning journey.<br /><br />Dan.Dan Abricossowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14179679544343669201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1349996487661699948.post-4521767462150652012016-12-31T23:01:38.106+13:002016-12-31T23:01:38.106+13:00Hello, Daniel I really like your story. My favouri...Hello, Daniel I really like your story. My favourite part is when everyone sees the different colours on the floor and walls. I like how you have used speech mark to show the dialogue. Keep up the great work.Ohhsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17416583868915227548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1349996487661699948.post-1490085495140299852016-12-21T18:21:47.391+13:002016-12-21T18:21:47.391+13:00Hey Daniel
What are very suburb short story. I lik...Hey Daniel<br />What are very suburb short story. I like how you have storng and good words in your story. Keep on doing the great job. Ofahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05814125976257795293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1349996487661699948.post-4663899791660761492016-12-18T20:29:54.992+13:002016-12-18T20:29:54.992+13:00Hey Daniel,
Great story about a experiment gone wr...Hey Daniel,<br />Great story about a experiment gone wrong ( The Experiment part is amazing!). I agree with AJ that you have made your story more better by using powerful words. Great work Dan!<br />Leopotehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07981520086257030592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1349996487661699948.post-62408978369917448662016-12-18T19:43:18.750+13:002016-12-18T19:43:18.750+13:00Hello Daniel, you have written an incredible story...Hello Daniel, you have written an incredible story. I liked how you have used powerful words to make you story better. Keep on working hard.aminiasihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02977651187356968100noreply@blogger.com