For this task I had to do make a DLO about advertising a hover bike. I worked with Harry and Shannon on this task. We added things that would persuade people like special offer and 50% off. We also added a picture of a hover bike so people could see what it is.
Well done Daniel. I can see clearly which persuasive language features you have used to hook your audience in but when I read your blurb I see that you have drawn our attention to them but haven't said which ones you used. Please reword your blurb so that it identifies the persuasive language features that you used. This will help your readers make a stronger connection to your task.
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