Using DRAFT In Our Writing

This is my stretched sentence. We made our sentence first then we changed them using DRAFT

Before I used DRAFT

Who - The small dog barked.

What - The small dog barked loudly.

When - At midnight the small dog barked loudly.

Where - At midnight the small dog barked loudly in the back yard.

Why - As the clock struck midnight the small dog barked loudly in the backyard, at an intruder coming through the gate.

When I used DRAFT
At midnight the small dog barked loudly, at the intruder coming through the rattling and rusted iron gate.