Water Safety Paragraph

Why do we have to stay safe in the water? That is a questions many people ask. You have to learn how to stay safe in the water because the sea, you could drown or get in serious trouble if you can’t swim. Be careful when you swim, even if you are in a pool or in the ocean. It is really important for New Zealand kids to learn how to swim because New Zealand is a island (Land surrounded by water). Also if you get into trouble in the water put your hand in the air.

This is my paragraph about water safety that I wrote with Cyrus. We wrote a paragraph about water safety.