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Wednesday 26 February 2014

Monday Quick Writes

Invisible for a day

I woke up in the morning and I jumped out of bed. I was so excited because It was Halloween. I love Halloween because I always get to scare people. I walked in to the living room where my mum was and I said 'hi mum' and then my mum screamed and said 'flying clothes' then she fainted. I quickly run out of the house and started walking on the street. Then I looked down at my hands and I saw that my hands where Invisible. Then I had a idea. I could pretend to be a ghost because it was Halloween. So I went to someone's door and I said trick or treat. A little boy answered the door and when he saw me he screamed and dropped the candy. I picked up as much candy as I could and then I ran. I went around the neighborhood getting more and more candy. When I finished going around the neighborhood scaring people. I went to the next street and I did the same thing all over again. It was dark and my bag was heavy so I thought I should go home now. When I got home I could barely see. I got in bed and fell asleep immediately.                          

3 comments:

  1. I like the way you have made our quick write into a story Daniel! I wonder what the little boy could see when you knocked on the door.

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    1. Thank you Mrs Miller.The boy just saw flying clothes and a flying horrifying mask at the door.

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    2. Wow, that would be scary! No wonder he screamed and dropped the candy!

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