Tuesday, 6 October 2015

Holiday Reading Challenge: Rewrite the ending

Will stole the key from the sleeping guards. He sneaked up to George and the other pirates cell. He unlocked the door and quietly woke up his fellow pirates. They were sleepy but realized what was happening. They all escaped into the night and not one of them was seen. 

Title - Pirate X
Author - Sherryl Clark
Type of book - Fiction and Adventure
Why my ending is better - My ending is better because in my ending Will's fellow pirates don't get hanged for piracy. 


  1. Wow Daniel I like your ending. Will and his friends were like ninjas taking the key.

  2. Your ending seems to be helpful to the pirates.

  3. Hi Daniel,
    I love your ending. Your paragraph hooks the reader in and makes them want to read more about the story