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Tuesday, 6 October 2015

Holiday Reading Challenge: Rewrite the ending

Will stole the key from the sleeping guards. He sneaked up to George and the other pirates cell. He unlocked the door and quietly woke up his fellow pirates. They were sleepy but realized what was happening. They all escaped into the night and not one of them was seen. 

Title - Pirate X
Author - Sherryl Clark
Type of book - Fiction and Adventure
Why my ending is better - My ending is better because in my ending Will's fellow pirates don't get hanged for piracy. 
 
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4 comments:

  1. Ohhsen11 October 2015 at 21:34

    Wow Daniel I like your ending. Will and his friends were like ninjas taking the key.

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  2. daniel13 October 2015 at 11:34

    Thanks

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  3. Ms. Kirkpatrick13 October 2015 at 11:44

    Your ending seems to be helpful to the pirates.

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  4. Mahdia20 April 2016 at 10:08

    Hi Daniel,
    I love your ending. Your paragraph hooks the reader in and makes them want to read more about the story

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